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Should we write about established characters in an established setting?
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Established characters in an original world
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Original characters in an established world
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No - totally original idea!
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Let's write about Buska going for a pint
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PostSubject: Re: Forum Fiction Troubleshooting/Comments Thread   Forum Fiction Troubleshooting/Comments Thread - Page 4 EmptyFri 14 Mar 2014 - 18:27

I'm going to add a character called Fanny in my next chapter.
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A deathly serious little adventure full of intrigue and drama but with silly names and innuendos is pretty much my ideal scenario.
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PostSubject: Re: Forum Fiction Troubleshooting/Comments Thread   Forum Fiction Troubleshooting/Comments Thread - Page 4 EmptyFri 14 Mar 2014 - 21:05

Eh, I'm not a big fan of penis humour.  I guess it comes from having a single-sex education where drawing male genitalia on the whiteboard was the highest form of wit.  (Jay's .gif is making me laugh though.)

"Then why did you name the guard Dick?" I hear you cry.
"I DON'T KNOW," I shout back, before frothing at the mouth and falling over.

(Just to clarify, I am definitely not trying to tell anyone what to write or what not to write here.  That would undermine the entire point of the thingummy, not to mention guarantee that Beemoh's next passage would be just a continual deluge of penis jokes.)
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Aye, the .gif was partially in jest - whilst I wouldn't be too amused at seeing our story become Carry On Steampunk, there's nowt wrong with a sly innuendo here and there.
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PostSubject: Re: Forum Fiction Troubleshooting/Comments Thread   Forum Fiction Troubleshooting/Comments Thread - Page 4 EmptySat 15 Mar 2014 - 1:27

I'm partial to the odd penis joke, you might be surprised to hear, but I would hate if all that undermined us trying to write a decent story. We should treat it the way I used to treat school work; you do the best work you can while sneaking the jokes in for your mates.

Did I ever tell you about the monologue I did in drama about addiction which brought a few people to tears but had a final line that revealed it was about Tetris and was full of in jokes for my mates? No? That was basically the whole story.

Did I ever tell you the one about the grown man who pissed himself in Tesco?
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That Tetris one needs expanding on.  Laughing 
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Seconded. Tetris in-jokes are good in-jokes.
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This was a good seven or eight years ago, so I'll do my best. It was in an English language class for gifted and talented students at GCSE which I really wasn't that fussed about and I did a monologue about addiction that I'd already told all my friends was about Tetris. Then I just filled it out with lines like "it all just stacked up" and "people think it's all just a game". It wasn't especially funny apart from the fact that people were laughing while the teachers had absolutely no idea why and it made them look super insensitive.
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...Yes, okay, it wasn't that funny. Razz You probably had to be there.
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You also had to be 15.
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Balladeer wrote:
I guess it comes from having a single-sex education where drawing male genitalia on the whiteboard was the highest form of wit.

...you went to school on this forum?
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Gents, I've got a job interview tomorrow, so I won't be able to write my bit in time. Painfully short notice, I know, but could someone else take over? I'll be able to slot in right afterwards, for sure.
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Is today not free for writing, ZJ? Andyman, can you fill in?


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...you went to school on this forum?
We take balla to school every single day.
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I should be able to write something this evening!
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Sorted.  Smile 
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Is today not free for writing, ZJ?

As part of interviews for my line of work you have to do a sample lesson. I'm getting it ready right now; I shouldn't even be typing this! :affraid:
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This writing stuff is tougher than I thought, Ill get it up after uni tomorrow as I'm only in til 11. More fun than the interview prep/dissertation writing I should be doing!
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Almost a full lap! Grin 
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"Copper Horses" has a nice ring to it.
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Still set for writing this today Zero?  Smile 
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Yes, sir! Just got to get me home and settled in.
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Good stuff!  Smile Almost one full lap done!
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Good job that ZJ!  (Hieronymus is a combination of that upgrade chap from Skyward Sword and Ted Tonate in my eyes.)  I'm going to do something that we used to do back in FFs of yore: a tracking post, showing where all the characters were last seen, in chronological order of last appearance.

The Duke of the Low Forest: Going into the palace

Lucia Velli's brother: The Great Hall

Lucia Velli: About to be called to her seat

Three vampires (two female one male): Going back into the palace

Dick the guard, his younger colleague: Outside the palace, watching the vampires go in

Chuck: Chuck-ing up in the lavatory, having been seated

Cooper: Going upstairs from the kitchen, with glasses

A masked man with no invitation: The kitchen, adding to the goodies

Head Servant Ronald Harrison, King's Chief Engineer Hieronymus: Hieronymus' chamber, box-watching.

Think that's everyone (who's been named and made an appearance).
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